[FIX] Inventory: Delivery Costs module installation label

closes odoo/documentation#15579

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Signed-off-by: Erin Jerison (erjer) <erjer@odoo.com>
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Co-authored-by: larm-odoo <121518652+larm-odoo@users.noreply.github.com>

content/applications/inventory_and_mrp/inventory/shipping_receiving/setup_configuration.rst

@@ -4,6 +4,11 @@
 Delivery methods
 ================
 
+In Odoo, *delivery methods* make it possible to calculate shipping costs directly on sales orders
+and e-commerce carts, providing customers and sales teams with accurate shipping fee information.
+This transparency helps close sales by showing customers the exact cost for each shipping carrier or
+delivery timeframe.
+
 When activated in Odoo, the *Delivery Methods* setting adds the option of calculating the cost of
 shipping on sales orders and e-commerce shopping carts.
 
@@ -18,11 +23,11 @@ are calculated based on the carrier's pricing information.
 Configuration
 =============
 
-To calculate shipping on sales orders and e-commerce, the *Delivery Costs* module must be installed.
-To do so, navigate to the :menuselection:`Apps` application from the main Odoo dashboard.
+To calculate shipping on sales orders and e-commerce, the **Delivery Costs** module must be
+installed. To do so, navigate to the :menuselection:`Apps` application from the main Odoo dashboard.
 
-Then, remove the :guilabel:`Apps` filter, and type in `Delivery Costs` in the :guilabel:`Search...`
-bar. After finding the :guilabel:`Delivery Costs` module, click :guilabel:`Activate` to install it.
+Then, remove the :guilabel:`Apps` filter, and type in `Delivery Costs` in the search bar. After
+finding the :guilabel:`Delivery Costs` module, click :guilabel:`Install` to install it.
 
 .. image:: setup_configuration/install-module.png
    :alt: Install the Delivery Costs module.
@@ -32,27 +37,34 @@ bar. After finding the :guilabel:`Delivery Costs` module, click :guilabel:`Activ
 Add shipping
 ============
 
-Shipping methods can be added to sales orders in the form of delivery products, which appear as
+Shipping methods are added to sales orders in the form of delivery products, which appear as
 individual line items. First, navigate to the desired sales order by going to :menuselection:`Sales
 app --> Orders --> Orders`.
 
-On the sales order, click the :guilabel:`Add shipping` button, which opens the :guilabel:`Add a
-shipping method` pop-up window. Then, choose a :guilabel:`Shipping Method` from the list.
+Open the desired sales order, then click the :guilabel:`Add shipping` button. The :guilabel:`Add a
+shipping method` pop-up window opens. Then, using the drop-down menu, select an available shipping
+method.
 
 The :guilabel:`Total Order Weight` is pre-filled based on product weights (that are defined in the
-:guilabel:`Inventory` tab for each product form). Edit the field to specify the exact weight, and
-then click :guilabel:`Add` to add the shipping method.
+:ref:`Inventory <inventory/product_management/manufacture>` tab for each product form). Edit the
+field to specify the exact weight, and then click :guilabel:`Add` to add the shipping method.
 
-.. note::
+.. important::
    The amount defined in :guilabel:`Total Order Weight` overwrites the total product weights defined
    on the product form.
 
-The shipping cost is added to the *sales order line* as the :guilabel:`Delivery Product` detailed on
-the shipping method form.
+.. note::
+   Some connected shipping methods require obtaining rates from the carrier. In this situation,
+   click the :icon:`oi-arrow-right` :guilabel:`Get rate` button, and the shipping costs are
+   automatically updated from the carrier. These rates cannot be modified.
+
+The shipping cost is added as a line item in the :guilabel:`Order Lines` tab as the
+:guilabel:`Delivery Product` detailed on the shipping method form.
 
 .. example::
-   `Furniture Delivery`, a delivery product with a fixed rate of `$200`, is added to sales order
-   `S00088`.
+   A customer purchased a left-sided desk with storage and requested the item be delivered by hand.
+   This delivery method is defined as `Furniture Delivery (Manual)` and has a cost of `$200`. The
+   sales order contains two line items: one for the desk, and another for the delivery method.
 
      .. image:: setup_configuration/delivery-product.png
         :alt: Show delivery order on the sales order line.
@@ -61,7 +73,9 @@ Delivery order
 --------------
 
 The shipping method added to the sales order is linked to the shipping carrier details on the
-delivery order. To add or change the delivery method on the delivery itself, go to the
+delivery order. After confirming the order, a :icon:`fa-truck` :guilabel:`Delivery` smart button
+appears at the top of the page. Click the :icon:`fa-truck` :guilabel:`Delivery` smart button to open
+the warehouse delivery form. To add or change the delivery method on the delivery itself, open the
 :guilabel:`Additional Info` tab and modify the :guilabel:`Carrier` field.
 
 .. image:: setup_configuration/delivery-order.png