lowercase instead of uppercase, colon instead of comma

There was combination of comma, followed by uppercase article which is not correct. So replaced upper case article with lowercase one and tried also other variants instead of comma between sentences and colon seems to fit best (but may be only subjective perception).

Signed-off-by: p-bo <pavel.borecki@gmail.com>
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2022-11-18 14:42:56 +01:00
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@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ Upgrade quickstart
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One effective, if unofficial method for keeping Nextcloud current on Linux servers is by configuring
your system to use Nextcloud via a self contained "Snap" package, A technology allowing users to
your system to use Nextcloud via a self contained "Snap" package: a technology allowing users to
always have the latest version of an "app".
That version from Canonical is quite restrictive. It is not aimed at developers or advanced users