Various copyedits to reduce future tense, wordiness, and use of 'please' (#5788)

* Reword lots of instances of 'will'

* Reword lots of instances of won't

* Reword lots of instances of we'll

* Eradicate you'll

* Eradicate 'be able to' type of phrases

* Eradicate 'unable to' type of phrases

* Eradicate 'has / have to' type of phrases

* Eradicate 'note that' type of phrases

* Eradicate 'in order to' type of phrases

* Redirect to official Chef and Puppet docs

* Eradicate gratuitous 'please'

* Reduce use of e.g.

* Reduce use of i.e.

* Reduce use of N.B.

* Get rid of 'sexagesimal' and correct some errors
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Misty Stanley-Jones
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@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ published: false
This is an initial attempt to make it easier to test the examples in the https.md
doc.
At this point, it has to be a manual thing, and I've been running it in boot2docker.
At this point, it is a manual thing, and I've been running it in boot2docker.
My process is as following:
@@ -26,4 +26,4 @@ Start another terminal:
root@boot2docker:/# cd docker/docs/articles/https
root@boot2docker:/# make client
The last will connect first with `--tls` and then with `--tlsverify`, both should succeed.
The last connects first with `--tls` and then with `--tlsverify`, both should succeed.